Wednesday, September 1, 2010

DWP - rain: two haikus

rain pelted on trees
lightning guiding the assault
me, i'm numbed with pain.

...

he's gone with the rain
his mem'ry washed away and
i'm alone again.

1 comment:

  1. I like what you did with both of those, particularly the second :)

    And apologies for not following your blog sooner, for some reason I thought I'd already had!

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